En sang jeg har skrevet Ö! xD

Im standing here again
Standing in the flames
Get me out, let me in
Can’t you see, what is driving me?
You think it’s all a shame
Standing here in the flames
Let the games begin
Get me out, let me in
This is getting me
But when I look at you, the eyes is cold shining, gone
All there is left is the flames burning, burning you, burning me
Im screaming on the top of my voice
Love hate, its all the same
Get me out, let me in
Im looking up, to the sky’s, to the eye, the eye of the world
Please let it rain on me, let the flames be the end
Let it all be gone,
Let it be done
Let the flames be your shame
So get me out of here
Let you be the one
Be the one to burn up in this hell
The hell you made,
The hell you loved that much
Im gone
Im done
So where is your god now?
Where is the one
The one that you said would help you
The one you said would take away the pain?
His gone,
His done
So just take me out of here
Make this pain go away.

Godt skrevet! 8D
Kommer fra mig som både er elendig til at digte
og til at skrive sange! Tro mig der er en god grund
til at jeg begyndte at skrive RPG XD nå men jeg har
ikke rigtigt noget kritik til din sang den er godt skrevet
- og hvis der var en der sang sangen ville jeg sandsynlivis
høre den!! ^^

MVH Damia